I am watchin the unordered bunch of plants across my window… A lost lil chicken is takin a maze along the rows to find its desination… I hope it never gets out of the maze for i see crows on the treetops waiting for their meal …
But the lil gal is nt afraid f d predators I guess… she finds her way out and to her mom who was tryin to rescue her siblings…
Y din she stay inside the loop til d crows flew away?? Y had she to risk her life?? What if her mother was not der to hide her??
Maybe that’s what we mean by “taking chances”… The one-month-old has reminded me the famous quote...” its just the fear that we should fear… “
I delete the mail from my inbox.. I decide to take a chance…
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good... your story has in a sense the structure of a haiku poem.... 1."the physical setting"
ReplyDelete2. "the observation".
3. "the revealation".(or 'little enlightenment' as u call!)...
haiku poem though is jus 3 lines...
write till da writer is no more....
thanks a lot for the comments, Anand... :)
ReplyDeletewow ... its always nice read articles which 'make believe' people that the person is telling about something from their life.
ReplyDeletequick out of topic point: thanks for visiting my post and more importantly thanks for taking time to comment :)